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8th-Jul-2008 06:56 pm - Teaser Tuesday
Lady Dress
Here's a scene from the new version of Bird. I wrote this today at work so it's a little rough. This is where Ellie meets another person that's cursed. 


 

I’d never seen a curse quite so large or complex. It seemed to originate at his throat and spread from there. Several tendrils disappeared beneath the collar of his white shirt. More of it crawled up the left side of his face, covering one eye. It turned that eye completely black leaving the other a pleasant shade of ocean green.

Curses were supposed to scar the bearer, make them ugly and undesirable—but Tram’s curse—it only made him more handsome. And right now I couldn’t seem to take my eyes off him.  

6th-Jul-2008 09:42 pm
Lady Dress
Have you ever done something different writing-wise because it sounded like such a good idea in your head but no matter how hard you try to get it on paper, it just never hooks you? Like you get excited thinking about it and plotting it and then you sit down to write and before you know it, you've emptied out the junk drawer, organized it and moved on to the bathroom cabinet. And a week later, your manuscript has like 2,000 words, but your house is sparkling clean.

That's me with this new Victorian fantasy MG I'm calling Bird. I reallyreallyreally love the idea, but I can't seem to sit down and write it and I'm only at the beginning! Beginnings are my favorite part! If it feels like a chore already, surely that's a bad sign!

So today, I copied and pasted the first chapter into a new document and I started completely over. And instead of using a thirteen-year-old MC in third person, I used a sixteen-year-old MC in first person. Before I knew it, I had three pages single spaced. Maybe I'm just not meant to write MG fiction?

Or it could be I need a writing break and my brain is telling me to slow down. Or it could be that I miss Ashley and Kahne from Possession. Possession sequel, maybe... 

 
1st-Jul-2008 03:34 pm - Teaser Tuesday: Bird
Zodiac

I'm working on that Victorian fantasy I talked about forever ago. Well, I guess I can't say I'm working on it so much as I'm toying with it. 

Here's the opening paragraph:

Ellie rubbed the curse mark on the underside of her wrist. It appeared on her thirteenth birthday, a sure sign she’d inherited the curse through family lineage. It wasn’t her fault, but people looked at her like she deserved the curse, like it was a punishment for some terrible deed. When in fact, she had no idea where the curse had come from. Neither did her parents. 

6th-Nov-2007 05:25 pm - Teaser Tuesday
Sunshine thru Leaves
With AA out there and Possession still under consideration, I thought it was time to take a break (a little break). I've been reading more. I read Nickel and Dimed over the weekend. I just started Midnighters yesterday and really like it so far. I'm about halfway through A Great and Terrible Beauty. I'm on week four with that book now. It's not as terrible as I thought, but it's not exactly capturing my attention either. I mean, it's good. I particularly LOVE Gemma's voice, but nothing seems to be happening to keep me reading. Anyway, I've been working slowly on the Victorian Fantasy. In the last week, I added another 1,000 words to it. I've also started about four other new WIP! I just like playing with new things and I think it'll be good for me. 

Here's a piece of another sci-fi YA: (inspired by my car-deer accident, no doubt!)



            They found the BMW bent around a tree, a deer injured at the roadside.

My mother loved deer. She had an odd talent of summoning animals. They gathered wherever she was. Maybe that deer, that night, had sensed her. Or maybe he’d just been running scared from something else.

It didn’t matter now.

The deer was dead. So was my mother.

 

(Notice how it's in first person. It's very weird, considering I haven't revisited first person since last summer when I wrote Possession. For some reason, this book just *wanted* to be in first.)
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