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19th-May-2008 09:18 pm - Many a thing
Vintage Lady Beach
1. I'm quitting energy drinks tomorrow! I binged all weekend, cut back yesterday, only had one today, and tomorrow I'll have none. Seriously, if I quit smoking, I can quit energy drinks and stick with it!

2. Allow me a moment to be a crabby bank teller: Don't bring eight deposits and two tax payments to the drive-thru thereby holding everyone else up because you couldn't get off your butt and walk inside to the lobby! ESPECIALLY when the business you own is a health club!!!! 

3. I miss The Hills. ;( August cannot come fast enough. 

4. Did anyone see the Supernatural finale on Thursday? What did you think?

5. Has anyone read The Host? I'm having a hard time getting into it. Does it get better?

6. I read Holly Black's Ironside and Melissa Marr's Ink Exchange both within the last week. I loved them and I'm sad there won't be another story with Kaye and Roiben, but at least there will be more Marr books! Yeah!

7. Possession is almost finished! (And I'm afraid it sucks!)

 
7th-May-2008 10:37 am - Interview with a Character
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I rememeber a while ago (months maybe?) someone on my LJ list interviewed their characters as a way to get to know them better. Was it [info]britlitfantwin? I remember enjoying the post and had said I'd give it a try but never got around to it until now.

I interviewed Kahne, because he's more interesting and complicated and hardly ever talks about himself. How's a writer to get to know her characters if they won't talk?

So I dragged it out of him...

Good morning, Kahne! I thought we'd start this interview out by playing a game.
Games are for children. Do I look like a child?

22nd-Apr-2008 08:58 am - Finally! A Tuesday I can Tease!
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I've been working on the Possession revision slowly but surely. I got a lot done this weekend, but yesterday? I rearranged two paragraphs and wrote enough fresh material to fill a teaspoon. 

But maybe that's for the better. Maybe taking my time on this revision instead of speeding through it will make the book a million times better. I can hope, right?

And to celebrate my slow but steady progress, I think I'll post a teaser. This was something I wrote over the weekend. It's a completely new scene to the book. A lot is changing. Even Kahne and Ashley feel different, though I'm having a hard time determining whether or not that change is for the better. 

Enough talking from me!

**I trimmed it down a bit because it was too lenghty! But I wanted to get all the good bits in there. :)

 

Kahne grabbed the TV remote, dropped it on the floor and crushed it beneath a heavy leather boot.

“Hey!” Ashley said.

“Watch.”

Within seconds, the plastic hissed and popped letting loose a cloud of thick, black smoke. She wrinkled her nose, expecting the smoke to smell acrid. Instead, it smelled like vanilla and black berries.

“What was that?” she asked.

“A witch spell.”

She rolled her eyes. “Yeah right.”

“You believe I’m a damned spirit possessing your best friend, don’t you? A witch is more believable, I would think.”

Well, when he put it that way…

She changed the subject. “How did you know the remote was spelled?”

He went back to the window, pushing it shut. “The smoke you saw? That was magic. And it smells like a witch in here.”

“Why would a witch spell my remote?”

He double-checked the locks on the window, pushing up on the frame testing its purchase. “I wouldn’t know. I’m not a witch, after all.”

There was something wrong with this situation—her taking the spell and the topic of witches with so little reluctance. If Kahne told her Jesus was real and that the Holy Grail existed, would she believe that too? She just might, because if demons and witches were real, maybe everything else was too.

“What are you thinking about?” he asked suddenly. The question stood in the room between them like some unfitting statue.  

Ashley stayed up against the wall farthest from him. “I’m just wondering why you’re here.”

“I came to bring you something.” He nodded at her dresser.

Somehow, she’d missed the small purple box when she first came in the room. Now, she took it in her hands, eyeing Kahne. What if this was another trap?

“Go ahead,” he said. “It’s for your protection.”

31st-Oct-2007 12:11 am - The List of Happenings
Red Ghost
There were several things I wanted to talk about in this post, several things that don't relate at all to each other. So I'll just make a list.

1. I hit a deer Sunday night. It's the first time it's happened to me. Really, I'm surprised it didn't happen sooner. In the newspaper, in the police records section, sixteen car-deer accidents were reported over the weekend. Ours could have been A LOT worse. Thankfully, no one was hurt and my car is still drivable. I have collision insurance, which means my car will be fixed for free. Yeah! It dented and scratched the hood, broke the grill and really smashed up the front fender, but that was it. Like I said, it could have been worse. I mean, that dang thing darted right out in front of me. There was no stopping. I remember thinking, Oh Crap. What if a hoof comes through the windshield? But there were no hooves, thank God. The scariest part was watching that deer roll off the hood of the car and then thrash on the side of the road. Luckily it got up and took off. I hope it's all right, but I'm pretty sure one of its hind legs was broken.

2. After submitting resumes and applications all over town for the last two months and receiving not one flippin' phone call, I now have two interviews this week. One at a local bank and the other at Walmart. My friend asked me tonight if I had the option to pick, which job would I go with and I had a hard time answering. The reasonable answer would be the bank---better hours, better pay, holidays off!, the opportunity to advance into a higher paying job. But I think I'd have more fun working at a place like Walmart, plus I know a ton of people who work there. I can name seven right off the top of my head. Plus I like buttons and scanners and I've always wanted to operate one of those awesome button-intensive registers. We'll see. Maybe I won't even have to choose. Maybe neither will like me.

3. I revised Possession again this weekend. I don't know why. I had already decided I was going to retire that book, but then I started thinking about it again and I couldn't STOP thinking about it. I rewrote the beginning and a few chapters in the middle. And then I status queried on a few of those agents who still had it or who had expressed interest in a revision and two of them got right back to me. One asked me to send over the newly revised edition via email when previously he'd asked for it by snail mail. The other agent wants me to email in two weeks. I also sent out four new queries. I'd thought I'd exhausted the list of agents for Possession, when really I'd exhausted the list I wanted. But this is the same thing as going for only the popular guys at school when one of the lesser known guys might actually be the better fit. So I have to try. 

4. I don't think there was a four. How about...Happy Halloween!!! 

This Mom cannot wait to go trick-or-treating tomorrow night. I love me some chocolate.
 
10th-May-2007 06:07 pm - Oh I hate forms
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Got a form rejection today on Possession. And this was one of the ones that went from a partial to full. Forms on fulls annoy me. I mean, how am I supposed to know what to fix if they don't tell me what's wrong? I realize it's not their job to tell me what's wrong, but feedback would be nice!

Anyway, I'm down another notch on the confidence scale, but I'm still not depressed about the whole thing yet. I just wish that if I receive another rejection that the agent gives me something to work with. I've only received one rejection so far with good feedback and I'm not even sure I agree with it.

I've decided to work on a contemporary YA next. Seems I need to switch every other book to keep my sanity. To keep things real. You know, that's just how I roll. (I've been wanting to say that forever.)

Like I did with Possession, I'm not going to talk about the new WIP for fear of jinxing myself. I've had too many misfires this last month or so and I'm not taking any chances. I'm not sure what that will mean for Teaser Tuesday. I'd still like to post occasionally and possibly from older projects just for the fun of it. 

Now I should get to work. I'm supposed to be emailing that proposal project to J tomorrow. And I need to get that chapter outline done!
9th-May-2007 01:04 am - The Funk
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Seems like everyone is having a hard time with writing.

I'm not posting an excerpt for Teaser Tuesday because I don't have anything to post. I haven't really written. I still can't focus on one project. And even if I could, I don't think I should talk about it because it might jinx me. I'd like to know what the hell is going on. It's driving me insane. Not writing makes me cranky.

Maybe it's because no one has heard positive news lately? Seems like it's a slow time of year, spring. Agents take on all the new clients in February and March after they've recuperated from the holidays and got their stuff organized. Then spring/summer comes and again, slow time of the year. There's a surge during the fall. Perhaps their slow time is making us cranky and not so productive?

But geeze, if I have to wait till fall to hear on my submissions, I'm going to be SUPER upset.

On the brighter side, because I've hit another anxious stage, I sent another equery last night and got a full request today. Unfortunately it's by snail mail. I hate snail mail submissions.
11th-Mar-2007 06:51 pm - New Chapter
Possession2
Two people said the first chapter of Possession was confusing, or didn't grab them enough and that's two too many. So I rewrote the opening and Mr. Jen gave his okay.

So here it is. Better? Still crappy?

9th-Mar-2007 04:25 pm
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Memes that deal with WIPs? Gotta love 'em.

Turn to page 123 in your work-in-progress. (If you haven't gotten to page 123 yet, then turn to page 23. If you haven't gotten there yet, then get busy and write page 23.) Count down four sentences and then instead of just the fifth sentence, give us the whole paragraph.

From Possession (page 23):

“Yeah.” Beth switched her cup from one hand to the other. “My mom works in the ER. She was there last night when they brought him in. They had to pump his stomach I guess. But get this—” she leaned over conspiringly, her hair falling around her shoulders, “—he was totally dead for like two minutes and then he just sat up completely fine.”



9th-Mar-2007 11:03 am - More good news that deserves its own post
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I'm almost done with the Possession revision. I've been working on it now about four weeks, but finally was able to focus all of my attention on it at the start of this week. I'd been taking notes on it while doing my revisions for the write-for-hire so I knew where I was going. I've been working on it nonstop and the pile of dishes and laundry proves it! 

I'd love to get it done this weekend and then do a read through. The thought of submitting it again makes me quite giddy. I can' t wait! But...must be patient...

Adding Kahne's POV was definitely a good idea. There were so many cool details that came through his POV that surprised me. And I really, really wouldn't mind writing a sequel to this book. I don't usually think of books in term of series or trilogies or whatever, but I love these characters so much that I'd like to come back to them. 

And when I'm finished with this, I think I might start working on that book that deals with death. Haven't really thought of a title yet, but I want something cool like [info]melissa_writing's Wicked Lovely. I like the feeling I get when I hear that title. And the images that come to mind.

 

21st-Feb-2007 10:14 pm - The Good and the Bad
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Why are you silly people not posting? Entertain me!!!! ;)

It's been one of those days where several things went wrong, but so many things went right that it didn't really matter. 

The Wrong Things
1. We woke up a bit late and when we went out to the car, all the windows were frosted over. And I couldn't find my De-Icer!
2. My nose was really, really annoying today. It kept getting that tingling sensation like I needed to sneeze, but I couldn't! No matter what I tried! I almost pulled the car over because my eyes were practically swollen shut from the nose tingles. 
3. Son forgot his library book and today is library day, so we had to turn around and drive back home for the stinkin' book because he was very sad that he wouldn't be able to get a new book today and I just can't stand seeing him sad when it comes to books.
4. The book I ordered----Tantalize----didn't come in today!

See...not too many bad things and nothing really extreme.

The Good Things
1. [info]sruble called me today!! She sounded a lot like I thought she would on the phone. I wonder what she thought I sounded like? Did I sound like the dork that I am in our emails? I mean, she knows I'm a total dork, but I often wonder how emails correlate to speech. You know?
2. We had Subway tonight and it was oh so delic.
3. I read a bit of Possession and I really, really like it.
4. American Idol was pretty dang good tonight! Lakisha rocked it!
5. Mr. Jen told me I looked like I was losing weight. Yeah!

Speaking of Possession...I cannot wait to finish up the revision and get it back out there. There are four agents who are waiting or said they'd like to take a look at the revision. And then, when it's back out there, I can start on something new!!! I've got a few ideas that I need to pick from. I've written at least a chapter of each of them and I think I'm feeling the most love from the urban fantasy I'm calling Half Shadow. But you never know which one will turn out to be the "next love" until you really dive into it. But I'm excited to get going on something new.
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